Bueno, en general la anatomía está muy lograda, quizás la nariz ligeramente mas a la derecha quedaría mejor, pero es solo mi opinion... no soy experto.
Bajo mi punto de vista, por lo demas, te ha salido genial ^^

Overall I think it looks pretty good, but here are my nitpicks:
-The hand seems a little too flat on the surface. I think typically it would be the palm on the surface and the fingers would be in a slightly relaxed position
-On the left side of her torso area, the line seems to be coming out a little too far. It's a little difficult to explain, so here's a shitty red line to try to help.
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Hopefully you understand somehow.
-It could just be you haven't put them in, but she seems to be missing eyebrows.
-There's a portion on the skirt (the part that I guess is between her legs) that looks it suddenly gets a lot shorter. I think you have the right idea with the skirt, but unless you make it look more like there's a significant part of the skirt between her legs we can't see, it bugs me. :<

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Thx.
Edited some things here and there. Specially the legs position.
I can see what you mean about the skirt, it's supposed to be hidden between her legs, but don't really know how to show that in this angle :/
The hand I'm leaving it like this just for this edit, I'm too tired to edit it today.

Once again I forgot to draw eyebrows...


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